- Romeo and JURIETTA?! (in a half writen - paused)
This story i was write since at the first December,this story is about the twin juliet named,Arisu and Alice.One of them will be enganged with the one of the son of the kingdom across.Arisu,Alice's twin sister wasn't interested with engangement and not really good with guests.So,she escape with her man servant,Shura Liddell to have a walk.Her father,Shiro Fukuyama had told Shura about Arisu's mother,Elena Blanc that she was is sickness and only Yamagata family (the kingdom across) had a medicine for Elena.So,Shiro used to engange one of her daughter to one of the son from the Yamagata's.While Arisu not fell in love for the son of Yamagata.But soon,something will relief.Genre : Romantic,Comedy,Slife of Life
- Featurings : Arisu Shirayuki,Shura Liddell,Shiki Yamagata,Alice Shirayuki,Shiro Fukuyama,Haruki Yamagata.
2. Clever and Stupid Over the Fumizuki High School ! (in a half writen - on going!)
This story is about a school named,Fumizuki high had a class system in 3 periods.The first is A class,which had a nice and good facilities like 5 stars hotel ad countain a celver peoples.B class is an ordinary class and countain of ordinary academics peoples.And C class is the stupidious class and countain of stupid or bad academics students.Shimada Ryuuji,a young boy who stuck in C class because of his "hell an idiot" but good at home economics,meet his friends in C class,such as Kirigakure Haruki,Chihiro Mirai and also Shirasaki Himeko.Himeko is a clever girl and her academics must be in A class but she's so careless about filling the answers.So,she stuck in C class because of the right answer was placed at the questions before.Such as a triangle loves between Ryuuji,Himeko and Mirai also a childhood friend of Haruki,Shirayuki Arisu.Genre : Comedy,Romantic,Slice of Life,School Life
- Featuring : Shimada Ryuuji,Shirasaki Himeko,Chihiro Mirai,Kirigakure Haruki,Shirayuki Arisu,Liddell Shura,Seishiro Saitou,Shinichirou Yuuko,Yamagata Shiki.
3. Sherlock Yuuko in Blackwood Parody (NEW - still on mind)
You're right,this story is about a detectives.This story about a girl named,Sherlock Yuuko and her partner,Shiki H.Watson are watching a cinema and suddenly a phone call was ringing and Yuuko must catch the culprit,Vincent Blackwood of stealing a diamond and escaped when they had a battle.Yuuko and Shiki asked their old best friend to help them,Haruki du Beaumont about roleplaying,though he's good at roleplaying.But,eventually,his fiancee,Arisu Blanc had been kidnapped by Vincent Blackwood,and the case also not finished yet about the diamond.One of a day,another case had come but not the Blackwood as the culprit but,another culprit that always left a word "R.I.P is back!".Not,only that,Yuuko also always had a given letter in her own office everyday without the name from and always left a queen card.What will Yuuko and Shiki solves first?Blackwood's parody?the culprit that always left a sign?or someone who always give her a terror and left a queen card?Genre : Action,Adventure,Crime,Comedy
- Featuring : Sherlock Yuuko,Shiki H.Watson,Vincent Blackwood,William the Ripper,Himeko the Queen,Haruki du Beaumont,Arisu Blanc
IS SOMETHING TAKES YOUR INTEREST ?
trio of them are interesting xD
ReplyDeletei have a test for you.If you can answer i will announce the winner of your test paper.
ReplyDeleteMake a short sentence with this topics :
1.a boy who got a leukemia will leave his girlfriend,he will wrote a letter to her.how's the letter?
2."no matter what i won't leave you alone...."
continue the sentence.
3.you're the romeo and want to had a marriage with juliet but her parents didn't approve you as juliet's husband..what will you say to juliet's parents to make them make up?
4.a writer had their own characters,mention who and their personalities
5.a transfer student is a boy,you want to make friend with him,what will you say to make him interest in you although he didn't seem interest with peoples.
can you answer?
1.for example the girl name is : Shiomiya Shiemi and the boy name is : Aragaki Yukio
ReplyDeleteDear,Shiomiya-san
I know when you read this letter i won't be by your side like i used to company you to read your mother's letter..You can accept that i have gone.hey ! don't be such a crybaby.Sorry,for hiding this from you..i had..Leukemia..sorry..i know you may angry to me..you can hate me..but one thing,i can't hate you for some reason..hey ! how's your university?i heard that you have received in that university..congratulations ! i hope i can be by your side and wipe your tears..don't worry..i will always watching you behind ! by the way,from now on..i try to call you Shemi not Shiomiya..before i can call that name,it was too late..hey,Shiemi..as long as i died,i want you to shine your life without me ! first thing,congratulations about your relationship with Suzuki..before i go,i have bought this ring..maybe,you can save that..i though of talking to your parents about marrying you..but it's too late..you can even throw the ring..oh,thank you for everything Shiemi..
Aragaki
2.no matter what i won't leave you alone..even the darkness will separate us,my heart will be always by your side.even i must willing my life to..that's not a problem..i will do anything to be by your side..i'm not afraid of being death..as long as i die because of you,that's a pleasure for me..all my attitude is for protecting you..don't worry,we won't be separated ! that's a promise.
ReplyDelete3.sorry for bothering both of you..please approve me as juliet's husband ! i know what am i doing..she's your precious daughter..even both of you separate us al long a we live,i'm not afraid or giving up now ! our love is much bigger than the sun or anything..our love are blessed by GOD ! i'm not even afraid of die because of Juliet.If both of you still didn't approve me,that's okay..i will wait until both of you can make up ! i'm not afraid of being old by waiting your answers i'm not afraid of die..even if i die i will always wait for your answer,because i'm Romeo Montague will be Juliet's husband in sickness and health do us apart !
ReplyDelete4.I never think about their information but i will try some.
ReplyDelete1.Haruki Kirigakure : the main character of my story,Haruki is a young boy who live only with his mother while his father had death since he was in a little age.He really good at cooking and sports but so-so at academics.Also,he is not-betrayable guy and likely to protect his friends.
2.Arisu Shirayuki: Haruki's childhood friend who likely to play and visit Haruki.She is a cheerful and loud person,if she's happy she like to jump up and down.Sometimes she can be an outspoken person.If she's in a badmood she will become "yandere" to peoples,especially the people above her name.She also a half-breed one.His father is Japanese and her mother is Enlands.
3.Shura Liddell : Arisu's childhood friend but he didn't know about Arisu had another childhood friend (Haruki).Shura looks like a lolicon person and caring.He sometimes call Arisu "snow white in wonderland" and likely to mock Haruki about anything is he doing.His personality didn't seems so serious.But,if he in a serious mood,he likely to quiet and ignoring peoples also the cleverest one.No one knows about his biography and people call him a mysterious guy.(he seems really care of Haruki?)
4.Yuuko Shinichirou : Arisu's bestfriend who looks like a "tsundere" person but she's also a kind person.Likely to punch people who she thinks stupid (almost all of the people already she punched)also an otaku girl.She likely to hide her true feelings between her fake one.She likes to get embarrassed by a sudden and get a soft-spoken by sudden.
5.Shiki Yamagata : both of his parents are japanese.He looks really weak at women and sometimes get so strong in a urgent ways.looks really quiet person but cool.peoples likely to misunderstand about him.But,he seems a kind person to peoples.
6.Saitou Seishiro / Vincent : often called the bad guy?he seems get interest with Arisu about something.He usually plays with Shura and looks really mysterious too.They said,his parents are die because of his fault.Eventually,the truth is,it wasn't his fault.He must be a good person,because of something he turned his self like a bad guy.
7.Ryuuji Shimada : his real name is William.A handsome guy who every girls fell in love with.also an elegant person with charms.He seems really get close with Himeko and really respect with girls.
8.Himeko Shirasaki : an elegant girl who really get so close with Yuuko.Himeko looks like an ojousama person.really loves something about love and interest in handsome guys.She's so spoiled and the truth she's very kind with her friends and a bit arrogant with other peoples.
9.Mirai Chihiro : Arisu's close best friend.She seems really close to Saitou,Shura and Haruki too.Likely to give Haruki an advise.She seems a wise person and smart.She lives in a temple and looks like a shrine maiden one.Also a spoiled girl.
5. HELLO ! MY NAME IS SHIRAYUKI ARISU ! nice to meet you ! what's your name? i heard that you're the new transfer student ! oh,you looked not interested with me? hey,new guy ! let me treat you an ice cream ! or...okay,forget it ! let me guide you ? now then,come here already ! (just pull his arm and give a guiding,huh! -____-)
ReplyDelete1 : 5 from 10
ReplyDeleteyour typing skill of writing letter is quite not good.the conversation like being forced.
2 : 8,5 from 10
the words are nice but too long and people will bored to read that.
3 :8 from 10
i know you may not have an idea for typing that..the words quite similar with Romeo real's word.But unfrotunately,the words a bit forced and not so natural.
4 : 10 from 10
perfect,your characters are a bit interesting.your words in Shirayuki Arisu's a bit funny and all of them had an interesting biography and an interesting types.
5 : 10 from 10
that's a good conversation,forced the guy to have a walk with you..that's quite interesting.i like it when you forced someone to make him interested with you.
that's quite good.
like what i said before,the winning announcement will be announce at new year state.But,your story is quite a bit boring.i have read it until finish.we have our score for each criteria.your score is not very good.unfortunately,i won't give you a nice score for some reason.i'm afraid your story won't win neither got the rank.Just wait until the new year for the real scoring.i'll tell you the score later by e-mail.